Is this a good cover letter?

Hi there, I like this cover letter - Its written by you so it is personalised. If you are after feedback, I would be happy to recieve this if I was a employer. You may not have to say you live exactly XX Miles away from XXXXXXXXX. Re-word maybe: (The schedule stated on the job summary works with me, I live close to your warehouse premises so would be okay with working overtime and weekends if needed.) Something like this maybe? Good luck with the job hunt - Hope this feedback helps